Audience feedback - third draft of digipak and advertisement

I uploaded my third draft of my advertisement and Digipak onto the social Networking site Facebook to receive more feedback from my target audience, as using this method I was able to share the images and receive continuous comments on it, enabling me to receive feedback quickly and easily.

From this, people commented positive feedback such as 'I like all of it' and 'Great Stuff!' This was able to show me that my products were compelling to my target audience as most of my friends on Facebook are within the ages of 16-20 and that the video generally appealed to them. Overall, I feel I have received positive feedback from my target audience on certain aspects of my ancillary texts, although they are still certain components I need to change, due to the negative feedback. I wanted people to be honest and give me as much negative feedback as possible so therefore I could adapt my products to the feedback in order for the products to be more appealing to my target audience. Responsively, I gained feedback such as "it does not say the artists name on it" and "you should centre align the 'Heartlines including Punching'" To conclude my feedback for my ancillary texts, I will further develop them in order for them to become more effective based on the negative yet helpful feedback